That time I won an award for my poem, "a moment"
I realized I had never shared this poem on my website. I feel like this poem is a part of the hardware for even the latest software I've been writing. I learned a lot studying at CSUS and was introduced to so many things. Studying Ecopoetics for example, was a big revalation, especially since I was kind of working poorly in that vein already. I feel this poem encapsulated what I really learned to do studying with Josh McKinney, and I was very happy that I won an award for it in my final year. It was especially gratifying to have the judge's notes so clearly illuminate my intentions: " There are some poems that guide readers more than others. "a moment" is not of those poems, and that is where it gains its strength. The writer forces us to slow down and examine what a moment truly is via enjambment, usage of white space, and lyrical langiage. In addition, the poet's images are like brushstrokes that reveal how a moment exists...As the poem breaks apart at ...
I LOVE this
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